D'Artagnan | strangeboy | The Three Musketeers

specific concerns: sometimes I worry that his syntax/diction is too uh, English sounding? if that makes sense.

Annie Edison | chloroformedthejanitor | Community

specific concerns: her voice has felt a little shaky for me as well, so I've been doing some canon review.

Any feedback/concrit is appreciated! They both have private HMDs in their journals, if you'd rather do it there. Thanks!