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[vitaelamorte]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?
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Character Name | vitaelamorte | Canon

<b>Character Name</b> | <user name=vitaelamorte> | <i>Canon</i>

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[vitaelamorte]

Feedback, comments, suggestions or advice for entranceway and the mod team? Leave it all here!

[strangeboy]

HI LONG TIME LISTENER, FIRST TIME CALLER. I really love/appreciate any and all work you guys do, and I know there's a ton of it! My only suggestion or advice would be to have big group posts about things like Activity Checks before making the changes? Which, I understand is a thing you totally don't have to do and it would be super nice of you to and it's completely within your rights as mods to say "nah, we're good" and not do it. I just think that having a discussion post before huge changes are put into effect will calm things down a bit and prevent explosions on plurk, etc.

but yes, that's all! thank you for your work I REALLY APPRECIATE IT

Karen

[oversight]

John Blake | oversight | The Dark Knight Rises
→ (Mirror) Johnny Blake | thatgrayarea

Xander Harris | theheartpart | Buffy the Vampire Slayer
→ (Mirror) Alex Harris | thebrainyguy


NOTES: Any any all critique/criticism is more than welcome. <33 I am aware I'm tragically slow, but I've been working on lessening the amount of threads I have. That being said, I could do better with follow-through on plotting, as well as branching out to new CR.

[selfrespecting]

You're fabulous and for what it's worth, I've noticed that your responses have been faster as of late, so I think there's been improvement there!

All I can really say as far as crit is that I would looove to see Xander around more. I know Blake is your main character and so you're more likely to toss him out, and he's lovely, but your Xander is so good too. ♥ And I say that as someone who hasn't seen BtVS, but he's just such a crack-up.

[selfrespecting]

Martha Jones | selfrespecting | Doctor Who | Personal HMD
Castiel | freewill | Supernatural | Personal HMD

[strangeboy]

Okay I love both of your guys a lot! Martha's voice is so clear and distinct to me, and I read every tag in her little accent just perfectly! Castiel breaks my heart in the best way, and I think you capture his exasperation/fondness of humans very well. I'd love to see more of both of them!

[nascensibility]

Evelyn O'Connell | nascensibility | The Mummy Returns
> (Mirror) Evelyn | mausetitolemy

Athos | thestormcomes | The Three Musketeers
> (Mirror) Athos | thesuncomes

[strangeboy]

hi I love you a lot and have to keep myself from obsessively tagging everything you post. (it never works) evie is so quirky and also so badass, and I would like to see more of her being both of those things, yes, and athos ATHOS you know my embarrassing love for athos so, yes.

[airshipswank]

Philip | radiopalkiller | Penumbra
â–º Mirror!Philip | killerradiopal

Lord Buckingham | airshipswank | The Three Musketeers
â–º Mirror!Buckingham | sivispacem

I currently don't have any specific concerns, so any and all feedback and concrit is welcome. In case you'd rather leave your comments anon I always have HMDs on their personal journals up.

[selfrespecting]

I just wanted to say that I know it was tough for you to drop all those threads, but I don't think it's been for the best, as you've been much more on top of threads now, which is great! I always love playing with you, as you know. Loving the thread with Philip and Castiel! ♥

[bottlearum]

Jack Sparrow | bottlearum | Pirates of the Caribbean

He's got his private HMD post over here if you were prefer that instead.
Any and all crit/critique is welcome.

[justguidelines]

So how perfect is your Jack???

I mean, seriously, I remember a million years ago when we had those awesome meme threads and stuff and thinking how absolutely badly I wanted your Jack in a game with me, and now. Here we are.

But seriously, he's amazing, and I hear his voice and can absolutely make the image of his entire...Jack thing gel in my head, down to his expressions and body language, because yes. And I'm so glad you put up with me and my stupid ideas, orz.

[cursebreaking]

Emma Swan | cursebreaking | Once Upon a Time
Jo Harvelle | lightgunhustler | Supernatural

Note: Emma's Mirror hasn't made an appearance yet and is getting an overhaul from my original idea for her, while Jo's is getting some polish/fleshing out. I would like to do a lot more with my Mirrors than I have! I will probably toss both of them up here next time. :) Both girls have private HMDs on their journals if you'd prefer!

[strangeboy]

/chinhands I love both of your girls, seriously! I think Emma has the right balance of sass and caring, and Jo, oh man Jo just breaks my heart, especially this recent stuff with Dean and Tom ahhh. I liked when Jo go to re-live her death (you know, "liked"), and I thought that was really neat, and I'm interested to see what else you'll do with that. Has Emma died yet? I think it'd be interesting to see her reaction to it as well. Um, but yes, good job all around A+

[justguidelines]

Hector Barbossa | justguidelines | Pirates of the Caribbean | Personal HMD






/rolls away into a hole

[selfrespecting]

I know we haven't played much, but I have stalked you from time to time, and omg, Barbossa is just so wonderful. I can't get over how good of a hold you have on his voice! It's like he stepped straight out of the films. ♥ Keep doing what you're doing!

Muse

[soldierfirst]

Sephiroth | soldierfirst | Final Fantasy VII Compilation
mirror account at onlyone_wing; I haven't used it in-game yet

I feel like I should say up front that work has stolen me away from the game for the majority of this month and I am aware of that impact on my activity. But I do welcome any and all comments on my playing and my writing style. (Sephiroth has an anon-enabled hmd on his journal if you prefer.) Please don't pull your punches, as the saying goes. If I need to improve, I can't do it without knowing what the problem is.

Jesse

[exvampirate]

Benny Lafitte | exvampirate | Supernatural

Graham Humbert | venators | Once Upon A Time

Jackson Whittemore | aerodynamically | Teen Wolf

[strangeboy]

I think I've only interacted with Graham, and I'm canonblind to Benny, but I love what you do with them! Benny is so sweet, but also badass and dynamic, and Graham cracks me up! I am looking forward to playing with Jackson :)

[distract]

Lydia Martin | distract | Teen Wolf
Mirror!version at susceptibly which I need to finally break out

[hypercompetent]

you are perfect period exclamation point and i love your face ♥

[strangeboy]

D'Artagnan | strangeboy | The Three Musketeers

specific concerns: sometimes I worry that his syntax/diction is too uh, English sounding? if that makes sense.

Annie Edison | chloroformedthejanitor | Community

specific concerns: her voice has felt a little shaky for me as well, so I've been doing some canon review.

Any feedback/concrit is appreciated! They both have private HMDs in their journals, if you'd rather do it there. Thanks!

[justguidelines]

I don't have anything constructive to add (I never do, you guys are all entirely too amazing for your own goods) but.

Even though I'm canon-blind, I love Annie to bits and pieces, just for the shit's she's given Hector, and if there isn't more of that in the future, I will be so disappointed. Just saying.

[ahousedivided]

America (Alfred F. Jones) | ahousedivided | Axis Powers Hetalia | Personal HMD
â™  mirror: rockflagandeagle

[unsleeved]

Okay so idk how it happened but Daryl and America CR is the actual best CR.

THANKS FOR THAT.

That's it, that's the comment. :|

[unsleeved]

Daryl Dixon | unsleeved | The Walking Dead

[strangeboy]

DARYL IS GREAT, he cracks me up so hard, and I just think his voice and motivations are spot on. I know he's pretty anti-social, but I'd love to see him come out more! I think it'd also be interesting if he could maybe find another character sort of like Carol? Who makes him want to do good things/be a real part of the group, etc. Just to see how it'd work in Wonderland, I mean. But yes, good job! <3

Koji

[thneedifestdestiny]

James Potter | pottershotter | Harry Potter
→Mirror!James Potter | notsogryffindor

The Once-ler | thneedifestdestiny | The Lorax (2012)
→The Mirror!Once-ler | thatholeinside

Tohru Honda | breakthecurse | Fruits Basket
→Mirror!Tohru Honda | cursekeeper

[strangeboy]

needs more once-ler and tohru

nah nah nah, but really I love what you do with your guys! I've never seen Fruits Basket or The Lorax, but I still care about your characters and have a sense of who they are, which is awesome!

Acacia

[appealingavarice]

Greedling | appealingavarice | Fullmetal Alchemist
→ Charity | cruelcharity

[strangeboy]

not super familiar with FMA, but I enjoy Greed's interactions with everyone! (Particularly James, ha!)

[unregenerate]

Meg | unregenerate | Supernatural

This has been a work-busy month for me, so I've been slow. Thankfully it's slowing down, and I'll be on top of things starting this weekend. I also have anon enabled hmd here.

[strangeboy]

I LOVE MEG, I think she's so hilarious and snarky and just idk, great. I'd really like to see her (if she's capable) form ~real connections~ with people, maybe? and start to care about what happens during events. If you think that's possible, obviously. Idk, just something to explore, and i love her either way <3

Pen

[thepointisdolphins]

The Kid | builditstrong | Bastion

Crowley | thepointisdolphins | Good Omens

Cecil Baldwin | goodnightlisteners | Welcome to Night Vale

[ahousedivided]

jsyk I read all of Cecil's posts and tags in his voice so yes A+ you're doing it right

AND ON CROWLEY okay I love your Crowley like this is no secret. But what I love is that you've got a fantastic balance between snarky asshole and something that rings close to human? Which is a weird way to phrase it but that's the easiest way to describe it. idk KEEP DOING WHAT YOU'RE DOING

[bossily]

Clara Oswald | bossily | Doctor Who
I understand that my tagging speed with Clara is off and on and the way I had come up with to help that isn't working out as I had thought it would, so I'm giving something new a try next month to see if that improves things. I also worry a lot about her voice, I always second guess my tags when it comes to her.

Claire Bennet | cheerleader | Heroes
I was worried about getting a variety of CR different from Clara's with Claire, and I think I've achieved that. However, I know my tagging speed is most definitely a concern and I'll be addressing that with some new tactics next month. My biggest concern with Claire is struggling with making her sound/act like an actual teenager.

[not_apriest]

My tagging speed is SUPER inconsistent due to RL things, but I think Clara's voice is great. I don't know much about Claire and haven't played off her, but if she's half as good as Clara, she must be awesome.

Sisi!

[hypercompetent]

Stiles Stilinski | hypercompetent | Teen Wolf
• mirror (throughhell)


I've been dealing with lots of drama lately so I've been slow, but I'm trying super hard to catch back up to everything! uwu ♥

[distract]

Thank you so much for being such an amazing Stiles to play off of. I'm spoiled with this entire cast in general, tbh. ♥

shariari bumpkins

[exercise]

scotty mccall | exercise | teen wolf

» mirror ( exercising )

[hypercompetent]

GUY LOVE THAT'S ALL IT IS, GUY LOVE HE'S MINE I'M HIIIIS

AKA you are my platonic soulmate. IC and OOC. And I love everything you do with Scott ever; I think you're an absolutely amazing one and I am spoiled fucking rotten to be able to do ridiculous things (GTL, anyone?) with you pretty much whenever I want.




♥

Sarah

[not_apriest]

Character Name Aramis | not_apriest | Canon Three Musketeers

Mirror Aramis confessyoursins

Character Name Ardeth Bay | medjaiardeth | Canon The Mummy/The Mummy Returns

Mirror Ardeth Bay desert_pirate

[strangeboy]

SARAAHHHH I love you, and I love Aramis. I know your work/personal life has been crazy and that sucks, but if it ever calms down, I'd love to do some like, intense event stuff with d'art and aramis yeahhhhh!

Mouse

[elegance_guaranteed]

Johnathan Teatime | elegance_guaranteed | Discworld

[strangeboy]

he is so creepy and great and I'm super into it and ANNIE IS BRINGING HIM CAKE SOON OK

MEGAN

[claimyourself]

Lena Duchannes | claimyourself | The Caster Chronicles
   â†’ mirror!Lena: wickedways

   + private HMD if you prefer

I'd really love to expand Lena's CR circle so I'll be working on putting her out there more. I don't do a lot of posts with her, mainly because I'm terrible at making things sound engaging.

[strangeboy]

I love Lena! I think she's super interesting, and yeah, I'd love to see her out more, etc. I know that she's shy, and I'd love to see her maybe kind of work getting over that? idk if that's possible, obvs, but anyway, I really like what you do with her!

[longdau]

Wingul | longdau | Tales of Xillia

[hamburellakind]

Playing off of Wingul with Beiste (so far, sob, i'm sorry for slowness) has been really interesting! I really want to see what his deal is aaaah i just need to tag more :TTT