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[ en ] tranceway . m . o . d . s. ([personal profile] vitaelamorte) wrote in [community profile] entranceworks2017-01-25 10:50 pm
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Character Name | [personal profile] vitaelamorte | Canon

hypoxic: (I have to believe wishing works)

Jessie

[personal profile] hypoxic 2017-01-26 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Leo Fitz | [personal profile] hypoxic | Marvel Cinematic Universe / Agents of SHIELD
Maya Hart | [personal profile] finewithhalf | Girl Meets World
thisismadfreaky: (Outside ~ Smirk)

[personal profile] thisismadfreaky 2017-01-26 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Fitz & Maya are so wonderful. Their voices are so spot on and I love everything I have going with you. I look forward to all of our future plans and can't wait to watch it all unfold!!!

Also, in terms of your RP in general, man, I love how easily you adapt and just roll with curveballs in threads. And you have no shyness about speaking up about things and pushing things along in a specific direction, which I really need sometimes! I can really get off in tangents and derail myself so like I REALLY APPRECIATE the nudges tbh. Plus, you just have this huge well of creativity that I adore too!

Keep being you!!!
hypoxic: } Pretentious lyrics: °C-ute - "Grieving Heaven" (Default)

[personal profile] hypoxic 2017-01-26 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)

Curveballs are the BEST BALLS. And also omg thank you you're so sweet D:

Also I'M GLAD YOU'RE INTO FITZCO BECAUSE THEY'VE GOT A WHOLE LOT OF SCIENCE TO DO. So I'm also glad that you don't mind that I'm bossy as fuck (I'm really trying to work on that)

thisismadfreaky: (Outside ~ Smirk)

[personal profile] thisismadfreaky 2017-01-27 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
AGREED! Heee, you're welcome! I adore you, that's all <3

Omg I'm SO here for all the Fitzco, psedoscience and power wonkiness in our futures!!! With me, it just balances out! Is good to have direction. :D
bravejemma: (kissing)

[personal profile] bravejemma 2017-01-26 05:30 pm (UTC)(link)


I love you, I love Fitz, and I LOVE MAYA even though she and Jemma haven't gotten around to meeting yet. (Does she need to talk about the birds and the bees? Jemma can talk about the birds and the bees. The emotional part is a bit trickier. But mechanics she can do.)

Fitz is wonderful and idc you can tag me with him forever as far as I care. I love waking up to tags from you. You take him, glaring flaws and shining qualities and all, and execute them wonderfully. (And, when appropriate, just upright execute.) Never stop.
hypoxic: } Pretentious lyrics: °C-ute - "Grieving Heaven" (Default)

[personal profile] hypoxic 2017-01-26 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)

OH MY GOD THAT GIF WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO MY HEART

bravejemma: (more than that.)

[personal profile] bravejemma 2017-01-26 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Because it's one of my favorites. It's sad but cute and he smiles a little even though he's decided he's going to die because Jemma's kissing his face :3

That's what I think about anyway.

ETA: And also Jemma just wants to kiss that face.
Edited 2017-01-26 22:47 (UTC)
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[personal profile] finewithhalf 2017-01-27 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
He smiles so much through that scene IT BREAKS MY HEART. She's having hysterics and he's so resigned and struggling to make sure that she doesn't feel sad about it. He doesn't want her to remember him being afraid, and he doesn't expect her to stick around long enough to see him drown. So if he smiles, then maybe she won't feel guilty about what's happened.

That's what I think about that smile. T_T



And I mean yeah Jemma kissing that face is a plus too.
bravejemma: ([au] hurt and scared)

[personal profile] bravejemma 2017-01-27 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
/ugly crying

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[personal profile] poppycock 2017-01-26 09:32 pm (UTC)(link)
YOU KNOW THIS but i had been reading threads by the mcu cast long before i apped. i remember reading a certain thread where darcy was yelling at fitz and all i could think was "oh my god this fitz." you brought him alive in a way that was so visceral because it was so honest. the moment you tagged klaus' intro i couldn't believe my luck /chinhands

i'm telling this little anecdote because i want you to know i really, really admire the organic and raw emotion you create when you play him. there's so much to work with. your faithfulness to who fitz is and what he is (a man who wants to do good and create good but can be driven by trauma and insecurity as much as love) is so moving. not only that but your enthusiasm and willingness to play out such interesting and brave story lines is so incredible. you are always upfront about what you want to play and how you want to play and i admire that. ❤
hypoxic: } Pretentious lyrics: °C-ute - "Grieving Heaven" (Default)

[personal profile] hypoxic 2017-01-26 10:48 pm (UTC)(link)

So when you tell that story my reaction is always more like "Fitz was SUCH AN ASSHOLE in that thread though!" And am mystified that anyone would look at Captain America breaking up a fight between two whiny adult children and want to play with them afterward.

And this note means SO much coming from you. It started out as a "eh, Fitz is afraid of vampires, this should be funny" and turned into this complex web of codependencies that I don't know how I lived without. Your Klaus is MAGICAL and I feel so lucky to be able to play this out with you ;-;

interpersonal: (point!)

[personal profile] interpersonal 2017-01-26 11:39 pm (UTC)(link)
i am canonblind to aos so i can't go into specifics with fitz, outside of how lovely it is to read his threads with klaus. i stalk them shamelessly tbqh b u t i am very well-versed in girl meets world and your maya is fantastic. not only do i hear her spunk little attitude in all of her tags, you strike a perfect balance between tough side/chip on her shoulder and her vulnerability so well. kudos for that!!

i just had to say that which is not really crit but w/e :V
hypoxic: } Pretentious lyrics: °C-ute - "Grieving Heaven" (Default)

[personal profile] hypoxic 2017-01-27 07:32 am (UTC)(link)
OKAY SO that plurk friend request you just got was from me because I have been meaning to friend you for like six months now (all because of my "I WILL APP JEREMY TO TVD EVENTUALLY" longterm project. this is a multi-year project at this point so the term is VERY long but you know whatever) and I kept being like "no people are weird if you just friend them for no reason I don't want to like STALK her just because I like her Elena" and then Christine was like "no dude it's fine Ella's chill" and I was still like "NO BUT THERE'S BEEN NO CONSENSUS ABOUT IT" and YOU KNOW WHAT. TODAY IS THE DAY. FRIEND REQUEST SENT.



I mean thank you for all the nice things you said up there BUT MOSTLY THIS REPLY IS TO EXPRESS THE BRAVERY YOU HAVE INSPIRED.
interpersonal: (Default)

[personal profile] interpersonal 2017-01-27 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
a;sk I AM VERY GOOD WITH LONG TERM PROJECTS and also that thread with them during the fourth wall was my favorite jsyk ❤

i'm also glad you listened to christine bc IT REALLY IS ABOUT TIME WE WERE PLURK BUDDIES now we can stalk each other shamelessly to our heart's content i hide nothing when it comes to my stalking. request accepted. :3
bravejemma: (tea)

Liz

[personal profile] bravejemma 2017-01-26 05:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Jemma Simmons | [personal profile] bravejemma | Marvel Cinematic Universe/Agents of SHIELD
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[personal profile] poppycock 2017-01-26 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
you are such a peach and so is your jemma ❤❤❤ you grasp so much about her, from her kindness to how formidable a person she can be; i absolutely love reading your threads and i'm so excited we're throwing jemma and klaus together one-on-one! you've been so encouraging and collaborative walking into this love triangle :P in this fitz/klaus cr and i'm looking forward to everything we can do together here with this mess!!
bravejemma: (Default)

[personal profile] bravejemma 2017-01-27 01:32 am (UTC)(link)
:3

whatever Jemma's gonna win the triangle
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Tessa

[personal profile] divaricate 2017-01-26 05:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Wanda Maximoff | [personal profile] divaricate | Marvel Cinematic Universe
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Puli

[personal profile] doorkey 2017-01-26 10:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Coraline Jones | [personal profile] doorkey | Neil Gaiman's Coraline
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[personal profile] tattooedredheads 2017-01-27 02:00 am (UTC)(link)
Nageki Fujishiro | [personal profile] mourning_ghost | Hatoful Boyfriend
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Kay | [personal profile] tattooedredheads | Estancia
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Chris

[personal profile] alphyswhatsabara 2017-02-01 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
Asgore Dreemurr | [personal profile] alphyswhatsabara | Undertale
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Vanessa

[personal profile] mettatonvevo 2017-02-01 04:12 am (UTC)(link)
Mettaton | [personal profile] mettatonvevo | Undertale
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Kelsey

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Sirius Black | [personal profile] goodwoofjames | Harry Potter

Greg | [personal profile] drummeintheface | Over the Garden Wall
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[personal profile] theothermrgray 2017-02-06 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Dorian Gray | [personal profile] theothermrgray | The Picture of Dorian Gray
R.M. Renfield | [personal profile] ratsratsrats | Dracula

Just a quick note, I'm thinking of dropping Renfield. I'm not sure if I can get a good feel for his character in this setting. I'm still taking comments on him.

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